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Movements of Drained Blood.
Contributed by
SilentPwn
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 12:47:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My youth is wasting.
My tongue is bleeding.
The clock is ticking.
My lover's weeping.
My eyes are wandering.
My mind is thinking.
My lips are figeting.
My heart is beating.
My thoughts are running.
The game is playing.
My time is stopping.
The feeling's staying.
My end is coming.
My friends are persuading.
My parents are watching.
..while...
My blood is draining.
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Re: Movements of Drained Blood.
(User Rating: 1 )
by veruca on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:00:23 AM AEST
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WOW E!!!!!! I feel a strong
power when I read this...
Emotional-intresting-powerful......
great write!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lov ya,
veruca |
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Re: Movements of Drained Blood.
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:07:11 AM AEST
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intense read I feel your emotions coming at me
( please dont let your blood drain though ok)
Michelle |
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Re: Movements of Drained Blood.
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:54:15 AM AEST
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wow powerful stuff.
I hope your not really draining your blood..
Life is too short as it is.
Try not to shorten it too fast..
You might find it too late to stop..
be careful.. |
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Re: Movements of Drained Blood.
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 05:21:57 PM AEST
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definitely interesting I liked the whole style and mood of the poem... very good.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Movements of Drained Blood.
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 07:06:46 PM AEST
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| I dont often read Dark poetry. But I must say .. this is good.. |
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