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A Dream
Contributed by
TheReturnOfx7
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:00:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Alive?
How so
I see them stare
Looking into my eyes
A snake and my reflection too
Tiny red droplets of life fly around the room painting
My blood
Leaves stains
Upon the walls
Life is fleeting from me
Thinner as the color fades
Slowly disappearing into the void left behind
I listen
Snake tells me
Of all that could have been
But the blood around me shows me that
These things happen when I feel like I am nothing
Can't
say
I see
My image
Looking back at me now
I'm not ashamed of dieing here
I know now that this was just a dream to begin with
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Re: A Dream
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by Chrissylee on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:42:39 AM AEST
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| i can certainly see your style has changed to what it used to be x7.. great write...and welcome back to ypdc.. yeah some of us oldies are still floating about in the back burner hehe |
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Re: A Dream
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:33:36 AM AEST
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Wow, i could never do that.
I like this. the words and the style are all perfect.
Great write, Phil xxx |
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Re: A Dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:18:31 AM AEST
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very nice effort with style -
listen
Snake tells me
Of all that could have been
But the blood around me shows me that
These things happen when I feel like I am nothing
i liked this. |
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Re: A Dream
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:09:53 PM AEST
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A dream indead Interesting; love it
cheers Robert |
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