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A Poem For Solmyr1404
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:04:13 AM in AEST
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how could you do this big bro?
you always told me to stay strong
i hear now about what you've done
where did you go so wrong
you weren't unloved
i know that's true
and despite my anger
i'll always love you
just talk to me man
tell me what's up
and if i'm buggin you
tell me to shut up
something, anything
to know you're well
so I can get out
of this God*amn living hell
Copyright ©
kailadragon
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2004-07-07 03:04:13]
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Re: A Poem For Solmyr1404
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:59:32 AM AEST
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awww very sad write, hope things seem brighter for you soon,
pixie xx |
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Re: A Poem For Solmyr1404
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by Solmyr1404 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:33:40 PM AEST
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| im so sorry....i just can't seem to do right....but as i read through this i almost started crying....i really don't know what to say to reconcile myself....but....i love you.... |
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Re: A Poem For Solmyr1404
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 02:57:58 PM AEST
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Eerily familiar to me . . . nicely written, and good job at expressing this feeling so well.
--Nora |
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