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a tear
Contributed by
Socke
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:38:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a tear so clear,so pure, so deep
run over my face
what do i feel?
what do i need?
I'm confused, I'm weak, I'm lost in space
hope the whole time to find my place
a tear so honest, so strong, so weak
take away my mind
what does it say?
what does it create?
I'm sad, I'm broken, I'm more than just blind
hope in my soul, peace to find
a tear so innocent, so soft, so magic
gives me wings to fly away
who will i find?
who will make me free?
I'm quiet, I'm open, I'm like a newborn today
UR love makes me strong, one last tear of happiness to pay
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Socke
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2004-07-07 14:38:46]
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Re: a tear
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by carmen_queasy on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:03:37 PM AEST
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| That was cute :) |
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Re: a tear
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:31:06 PM AEST
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| great write. =] |
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Re: a tear
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:05:44 PM AEST
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Oh dear Lis
SO u began to write and i'm the last one who knows ;)
very well written
i hope u get red of ur pain
i wanna u to keep writing i know u can be very good at it cause u r a deep person
and i hope am the one who u ment in the last line in ur poem..
luv ya
kisses |
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Re: a tear
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by fastpitchqt on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:07:29 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem! Tears of pain and heartbreak are the worst. Tears are far from a stranger with me. Very well written, keep up the good work! Check out my writing sometime! |
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Re: a tear
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 01:25:37 PM AEST
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a tear so clear,so pure, so deep
run over my face
what do i feel?
what do i need?
I'm confused, I'm weak, I'm lost in space
hope the whole time to find my place
this was really good i can relate to this poem well. great job.
Brandy |
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