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One moment
Contributed by
despised_freak
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:05:46 PM in AEST
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For just one moment
Everything goes away
For just one moment
Nothing matters
For just one moment
I dont care if Im perfect
For just one moment
I dont feel a thing
For just one moment
I give up on everything
For just one moment
I'm completely numb
For just one moment
I love myself
The numbness comes into play
Everything else goes away
One moment when nothing matters
This moment is such a rush
I never want it to go away
I'm crying out for something better
I want this feeling to last forever
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2004-07-07 15:05:46]
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Re: One moment
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:11:48 PM AEST
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Don't we all want that moment and feeling to last forever...??? Most of us do...this is a great poem...keep expressing yourself!
please comment on my work too
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Re: One moment
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:17:17 PM AEST
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| excellent write. summer's right. one moment can change everything. people try so hard for one thing such as happiness or whatever, and its gone instantly. |
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Re: One moment
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by _Raspberry_ on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:28:08 PM AEST
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| Great write, keep on striving for something better! |
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Re: One moment
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by WestCPunk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:05:13 PM AEST
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That was some good writing i get like that sometimes only when i'm upset or something but ya lol
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Re: One moment
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:55:13 PM AEST
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Feelings well depicted..... Good work..
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Re: One moment
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by despised_freak on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:09:59 PM AEST
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| Thanks. :) |
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