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Deceived
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:26:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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O Siren of hope
Let me taste your lure
May your poison pleasure my wits
Bleed me dry this time
O horrid Temptress
Hide not behind my loves eyes
Or never shall I see again
Have mercy for the weary
O Vampire of mirth
Free me of immortal longing
I sleep no more, love no more
Death, now, my only companion
O sweet Death
Sing of loves final verse
Bury her wicked plague among thieves
Embrace me now, in my forsaken fate
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Luinil
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2004-07-07 16:26:19]
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Re: Deceived
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by WestCPunk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 09:40:15 PM AEST
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That was really good i liked that! Keep up the good work!
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Re: Deceived
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by pixie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:10:50 PM AEST
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very dark write..... good work.
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Re: Deceived
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by wray on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 07:05:22 AM AEST
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| I like the way this was written, the way you pinpointed all these aspects of your lover(s) and described the devastating effect each has on you. Some original concepts associated with each stanza too. |
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