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my tears
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:29:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my crystal tears roll down my eyes
i close and re-open
to see the glitter glistening
i see the fairys dancing
and all the worlds beauty is shining from this tear
another world inside
living without any notice
of my presence standing low
i cry some more and a city of soft touch
rolls down my gentle cheek
i feel its warmth and i glow
im creating a life as i shed mine slowly
a life so delicate
it musnt be touched
and as the wind carries my tears
i know ive created much more
only saving my emotions bottled the city inside hiding its crystal walls
but now their shinning over a billion for all to see
above the worlds eyes
lies anther city in the sky...
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Hannah_Heaven
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2004-07-07 17:29:52]
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Re: my tears
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by WestCPunk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:37:10 PM AEST
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o0o0o0o0o0o0 i like this one really well written
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Re: my tears
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by fastpitchqt on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:05:40 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem!! Love the words used and the way it was written.Makes tears look like another world not just something shed with sadness. Very descriptive words, I loved it! Keep up the good work |
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Re: my tears
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:50:41 PM AEST
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| my oh my, this is quite a poem!! it was beautifully written, i loved the descriptions!!!!!, awesome awesome job! |
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Re: my tears
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:42:01 PM AEST
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Quite a lovely poem. What a way you have with words.
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