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Walk with the Demons
Contributed by
apollo
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:56:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am battling my own demons.
No therapy, drugs, or love can help me.
I have come to accept this.
When I am awake, I see them.
When I sleep, I am awakened by them.
They are everywhere.
In my room, in my car, in my soul, in my mind.
They are who I am.
They have taken me from my human self,
no longer to live a normal lifestyle.
For everyday,
I walk a little deeper
into the depths of hell.
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apollo
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2004-07-07 17:56:47]
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Re: Walk with the Demons
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by WestCPunk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:23:59 PM AEST
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It's short but very trippy. It's cool because of the direction you took into expressing demons like haunting you lol nice job!
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Re: Walk with the Demons
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:30:31 PM AEST
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Here's a quote from one of my favorite songs
"Darkness! Like an icy cold is darkness
keeps you in it's hold
for darkness keeps you hiding and utterly denying, you're in darkness!
You have took the first step to walking in the light. Admitting that you walk in darkness. |
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Re: Walk with the Demons
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:57:30 PM AEST
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whoa, the last 3 lines got to me "For everyday,
I walk a little deeper
into the depths of hell"
i like how you put that, even though its short it says alot and it was a very good write! |
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Re: Walk with the Demons
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:24:09 PM AEST
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| this is pretty cool, I liked it a lot. |
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