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Wilted Roses
Contributed by
WestCPunk
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:02:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Sitting in the candle light
Overwhelmed by the sound of the night
Staring at a vase of roses
And bloody gashes
My condolences to you
He who lies there all black and blue
She who is deprived of her imagination
Can't sit still and waits with anticipation
As the wax burns in my hand
As the flesh quickly turns to blood red
While the roses start to wilt
And the fire continues to burn
Nothing comes to mind
Except for the dilapidate souls
That have all been left behind
The ones who can't seem to find a way
To change their life for the better
And live it fearlessly
From day to day
To the broken hearted
To all who have sinned
Just remember to.....
Breathe like you'll never breathe again!
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WestCPunk
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2004-07-07 19:02:11]
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Re: Wilted Roses
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:52:34 PM AEST
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wow,great! i especially liked the last two lines, they gave it that extra zing,
"Just remember to.....
Breathe like you'll never breathe again!"
well written.
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Re: Wilted Roses
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 09:55:36 PM AEST
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Good or bad, happy or sad, strong or weak, it matters not. That is the one thing we all have in common no matter what our race, econonic level, beliefs. We all have to breathe to exist. Like anything else we should do it to our greatest ability. This is a interesting and unique write.
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Re: Wilted Roses
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:17:31 AM AEST
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Very vivid. Personally I am no fan of dark poetry. I would rather see you writing of joys or sorrows than despair or self-inflicted pain. That is my heart. But your path is your own. And the poem was good.
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Re: Wilted Roses
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by arden on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 05:07:13 PM AEST
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i loved this write. so beautiful.
5 stars.
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Re: Wilted Roses
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by bobbyclay56 on
Saturday, 22nd October 2011 @ 02:18:38 PM AEST
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Sweet little poem that strokes the sad part of our ego where we all have been at one time or another and some of us who are still there.
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