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Starlight, Starbright, One bullet, and a Flashing Light
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:32:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Starlight, starbright,
first star I see tonight.
I wish I may,
I wish I might,
Have the wish I wish tonight.
Starlight, starbright,
bring me my charming knight.
To hold me close,
make it alright,
Please bring me my charming knight.
Starlight, starbright,
protect me once, from this fight.
He hurts me so,
the lies recite,
Protect me once, from this fight.
Starlight, starbright,
make my heart, turn out right.
Left all alone,
no strength nor might,
Make my heart, turn out right.
Starlight, starbright,
one bullet, and a flashing light.
A silver trigger,
with hope in sight,
One bullet, and a flashing light.
Starlight, starbright,
first star I see tonight.
I wish I may,
I wish I might,
Have the wish I wish tonight.
Copyright ©
2ndChance
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2004-07-07 19:32:32]
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Re: Starlight, Starbright, One bullet, and a Flashing Light
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:37:01 PM AEST
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| wow very dakr, very powerful |
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Re: Starlight, Starbright, One bullet, and a Flashing Light
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by Joker17 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:50:44 PM AEST
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A very emotional twist on a classic, well done, nice originality. I have to say, I can appreciate the adult version of this, and understand where you must be in mind and heart. I hope all will end well. Remember, only keeping yourself alive, will keep hopes and dreams living as well. Time heals and/or makes changes if you just believe enough and have patience. I am living proof....
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Re: Starlight, Starbright, One bullet, and a Flashing Light
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 09:29:31 PM AEST
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How very sad. I liked the artistic spin on Starlight, Starbright. Please keep writing you have a real talent.
J~ |
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Re: Starlight, Starbright, One bullet, and a Flashing Light
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by mlcarter369 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:27:39 AM AEST
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| that is a different way to write its very creative good job |
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Re: Starlight, Starbright, One bullet, and a Flashing Light
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:41:57 AM AEST
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| Awesome. Strong...dark...powerful. You ought to this one on Narfland. |
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