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the best poem
Contributed by
addie
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Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
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The best poem ever !!
Is it the Daffodils or Is it about birds ,
The poem has been caught in my breath
The stanzas are touching my lips
The words-
Oh they are behaving like death
Not wanting to touch the pencils tip.
Darling , I am sitting here
With a piece of paper in my hand
And your name written on it.
OH .. you alone are so complete
What better poetry than this
Copyright ©
addie
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2002-10-24 07:30:00]
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Re: the best poem
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 02:13:34 AM AEST
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yes it is one of the best poems ever!
Always
Amy |
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Re: the best poem
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 06:42:51 AM AEST
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well said ...would have loved to have seen this extended a little more ..left me feeling ...where is the rest of of the poem ..so much mmore to say ..but i guess yuo want to leae yuor readers asking for more well yuo succeded with me ..
peace be your journey
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Re: the best poem
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:11:36 AM AEST
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| Beautiful thoughts and feelings..so simplistic in its elegance..Very nice :) |
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