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Doomed
Contributed by
Sinful_Misery
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 09:58:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A blissful realization; a tempest of doom
Reactions are different; visions of gloom
Pocket your thinking; notice the sight,
Everything is melancholy; nothing is right,
Escape from the fury, return to the hell,
See through its lies; seek and do tell.
Atracting its prey; tolerating its movement
Adapting to change; accepting it's testament
Illogical messes; justifying grace,
Virtuous fiction; leaves us with a chase
Skeptics cause dysfunction; an imminent trait,
Caressing the thought, we are nothing but bait.
Gracious contemplation; a result from the thought,
Is that of a wise person; a wise person taught.
Understanding the depression; comprehending the hate,
The future of this world, relies on nothing but fate.
The destroyed forces within, interested in our well-being
Shouldn't care anymore, for what they have been seeing
We've gone to far, and dug ourselves in, too deep.
With the effects of our actions, others, now weep.
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2004-07-07 21:58:57]
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Re: Doomed
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:20:24 AM AEST
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you don't paint the prettiest picture there...
good work tho :) |
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Re: Doomed
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 07:29:03 PM AEST
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to other commentor
not all things have to be pretty
this was a very good piece |
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