|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Scars
Contributed by
Dizza_13
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:01:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
These soul deep scars,
Re-open these scars.
These scars of pain,
These scars of torment,
This pain that I once knew,
This pain that now I feel again
Blood runs free,
The pain spews out
I dont mean to scare you
But this is my way,
Cos you dont know what its like
To feel this pain,
To have this shame,
And feel this way for life
The truth you know,
The life you live,
Its not mine
You just dont understand.
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
... [
2004-07-07 22:01:55]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Scars
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinful_Misery on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:06:51 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very well written. I feel the same way at times. |
|
|
Re: Scars
(User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:07:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| No one can truly understand exactly how another person feels. Just remember that, when we are in pain, we feel like no one has ever felt that way or the pain to the intensity that we are at that moment. Fantastic show of emotion. |
|
|
Re: Scars
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:34:51 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i agree with the other comments. somethings arent meant to be understood. |
|
|
Re: Scars
(User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:41:32 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
ONce again you've written something wonderful. Keep it up
loz
xoxox
|
|
|
Re: Scars
(User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:31:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I can relate great job...excellent write
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
