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Wishing
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:09:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Escape my desire,
Fear gripping my thoughts.
Worrying what may happen,
Such emotion masking jubilance.
Beauty and magnificenence,
Expelling all thought and logic.
Mind flooded with,
The thought of her.
If beauty had but one face,
It would be hers.
Like no other does,
The thought of her,
Flood my mind.
My mind shall never be free,
Forever shall I wish.
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Buggsy
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2004-07-07 22:09:41]
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Re: Wishing
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:31:26 PM AEST
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This was romantic, from the heart and really wonderful to read.
I also wish I could speak as easily as it is to type. Yet I can't imagine it.
Liked your poem immensely.
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Re: Wishing
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by freespirit on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:47:21 PM AEST
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Well written I also can write what I feel
it just comes so easy to me
always write from the heart
God Bless
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Re: Wishing
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:20:24 PM AEST
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So many of us will relate to your comment... I think the reason we are here - the reason we write - is because we can't 'get it out' otherwise.
This piece is very sweet, but sad... full of longing.
Hoping wishes come true for you,
SNM |
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