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I want out
Contributed by
drummerchic18
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:35:39 PM in AEST
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Im abused, and Im broken. I feel the heat of shame upon me. Im falling. I keep falling down this place is spinning like a merry-go-round. I cant grasp anything, I look down at my hands and their in chains.
I want out. To be free at last, I want to go home, forget my past. I want to be clean from everything, erase my past start from scratch. Im struggling to break free. I want out of this world, God rescue me, break the chains that are holding me.
(I) Go out at night, not knowing when Ill be home, or if Ill wake up somewhere unfamiliar and if Ill be alone. Dont remember anything, clueless of what happens, Im angry at the world, no one cares for me. I need to break away, This fright lingers with in me everyday.
I want out. To be free at last, I want to go home, forget my past. I want to be clean from everything, erase my past start from scratch. Im struggling to break free. I want out of this world, God rescue me, break the chains that are holding me.
I look up at the sky, Im flying high, But soon this feeling will end, And get to reality and then I will not see. Oh God please hear my prayer.
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Re: I want out
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by RedRose on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:44:53 AM AEST
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| I really like, a great write, It touchs that place in all of us that we wish could be washed clean of the past |
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Re: I want out
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:20:02 AM AEST
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| breathtaking. I am in love with this. I am off to read more of your work. |
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Re: I want out
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:46:25 AM AEST
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Very good writing even tho sad.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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