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'Incensed Wailings' by Thivanka
Contributed by
Thivanka
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:19:05 AM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Incensed Wailings
I have been perched upon a distant hill
Distant from all love and ill;
Espying all creatures whither away in debauchery,
Falling prey to their own treachery.
Never shall I weep for their plights,
I shall spit at their sordid sight.
Curse them night and dawn,
Watch them mourn and mourn.
All haughty perdition will seize thee,
All ailments will billet in thee;
Leaving thy dilapidated aggregates
To face thy much strenuous fate.
All will crumble, all I loathe,
Damnation to all who put forth
Wanton paths that I set foot on,
Traps my life denuded on.
-Thivanka
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Thivanka
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2004-07-08 02:19:05]
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Re: 'Incensed Wailings' by Thivanka
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:37:30 AM AEST
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"Never shall I weep for their plights,
I shall spit at their sordid sight."
Vitriol and smouldering rage, mixed with concise vocabulary make this a notable write.
Well done, and calm down. |
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Re: 'Incensed Wailings' by Thivanka
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by tbird on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:37:51 AM AEST
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| Oh how delighfully wrothful and pithy! I do hope that you have been released from your cantankerous mood:) |
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