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You Can't Go Back
Contributed by
norm
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:45:37 AM in AEST
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You can't go back and find, dear one,
that things are as they were,
One good reason this is true.
recall becomes a blur.
You look at one, one looks at you
Your mind tries to recapture,
The good times both of you had had
The feeling of pure rapture.
This may have been, for all I know
You two were just like glue,
But glue's been known to come apart
Mishandled, entre nous.
You get no sympathy from me,
You're half the broken twosome,
Seems to me you're just as wrong
and life becomes just gruesome.
Copyright ©
norm
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Re: You Can't Go Back
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:12:56 AM AEST
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A wonderful non-limerick, norm. Easy rhymes and a resonative message. I've never cried into my pint before, though - I like mine sweet and fizzy. ;o)
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Re: You Can't Go Back
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by Stoney1 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:11:16 AM AEST
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My experience with crying in my beer has always worked for me
just as long as I didn't do it on the job or just before going to work.
And one should never, heaven forbid, lose work due to applying
this palliative, *g* 'cus then you've got something else to cry about.
But I find that the beer, or its big brother the whiskey, acts as a
lubricant to help you expell the poisons from your system.
One caution though, never do it alone. You need a sympathetic
buddy 's shoulder to cry on. And he needs the lubricant to put up
with all the whining and moaning.
A good write.
Stoney
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Re: You Can't Go Back
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by shelby on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:40:09 PM AEST
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very right this is another captivating poem Norm
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Re: You Can't Go Back
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by pixie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:45:53 PM AEST
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great write, I cry into my beer often :(
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Re: You Can't Go Back
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:34:10 PM AEST
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Now Norm My Dear Friend,
Guess I'll have to issue a rebuttal for all your nonsense.......I remember perfectly, if you don't mind.....I know my mind!!! And none of it was my fault either. He was mean and still is.......he's a dirty rotten ....... loser.....because he lost me of course.....How you can say that I was wrong....well bless my soul.......I had a broken heart that really took a roll!!
Well written poem, but I must write a rebuttal!
You men you all stick closely together.....sticking up for each other!
Harhar!
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Re: You Can't Go Back
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by Stitch on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:19:46 AM AEST
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Nice to see a longer work from you
Although I love everything that you do
You make my day
with the words that you say,
and I love your poetry, too!
Stitch |
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Re: You Can't Go Back
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by Archie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:02:28 AM AEST
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| That is so true, our minds let us only view things and situations from a point of view that makes us look good. we have to make the choice to be honest with our selves then we can truly heal; |
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