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Blood Lust
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:29:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I have a lust for blood,
The taste feels so good,
Slipping down my throat,
Drinking from the ruby red moat.
I crave blood all day & night,
My wanting seems to win the fight,
The sweet, metallic taste,
Makes my heart throb & race.
But I dont want to drink from you,
Your veins look so full & blue,
I must fulfil my only need,
Splice your vein & plant my seed.
I just cant bring myself to do it,
I cant bite your skin & make the slit,
But I must feed I know I must,
If I dont I will turn to dust.
I sit here & I try to suppress,
Inside my head theres a terrible mess,
Its my love vs my addiction,
This was bound to cause friction.
You do not know my dark secret,
But for me I can not forget,
That I am indeed a vampire,
& your blood is my only desire.
If I told I would lose my love,
Whos beauty is like that of a dove,
I adore you & love you so,
But as with my love my hunger grows.
I cant hold on for much longer,
As my yearning becomes stronger,
Help me I need to feed,
But to do that you must bleed.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-08 12:29:49]
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Re: Blood Lust
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:24:50 PM AEST
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Very dark i like this alot.
great write... :-) |
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Re: Blood Lust
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:34:50 PM AEST
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| great poem! very creative and the flow is wonderful * |
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Re: Blood Lust
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:43:01 PM AEST
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My what a compassionate vampire. This is not bad at all for your first one. Keep working on them as I think you have the talent. You just need to cough up a little more darkness.
LOL,
Rita |
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Re: Blood Lust
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by WestCPunk on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 05:59:24 PM AEST
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Very interesting it's like a mixed decision and it's hard to choose one or the other. It was good i enjoyed it.
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Re: Blood Lust
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by venkat on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:50:40 AM AEST
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| I agree with the comment of Rita..so dark this is..venkat |
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Re: Blood Lust
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by BlazeingHeart on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 03:59:27 PM AEST
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| For a first try at vampire poetry you have great immagination and i look forward to reading more of your poems |
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