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Poor Fairy Princess
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:31:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Has pointed, fragile ears,
Cries a sea of diamond tears,
In her hair she wears a crown,
Dressed in a silk flowing gown.
Her tiny hands clutch her wand,
Her hair the colour of shimmering blond,
Sapphires sit inside her eyes,
As she watches the dancing fireflies.
Her wings like sheets of crystal,
Her skin like soft, peach pastel,
Lips like the colour of a May rose,
Silver varnish on her petite toes.
She is of such a delicate frame,
No-one in the land knows of her pain,
Her heart has lost its rhythm,
She holds the pain she has been given.
A platinum band around her finger,
A memory lost, but still it lingers,
She dearly misses the love of her life,
She has raw memories of once being a wife.
Why did it have to happen to her,
Now loneliness will forever stir,
Inside her body, mind & soul,
Her dreams are now the colour of coal.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-08 12:31:13]
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Re: Poor Fairy Princess
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by hannahbanana on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:43:50 PM AEST
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| wonderful write. i loved this. |
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Re: Poor Fairy Princess
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by Gentledove on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:45:01 PM AEST
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A sad write . A very nice write about the fairy folk.
Gentledove |
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Re: Poor Fairy Princess
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by bernard on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:56:32 PM AEST
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| I am pleased that you too have started wwritng ffairy talles Good workk bbernard. |
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Re: Poor Fairy Princess
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:36:22 PM AEST
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| very beautiful and sad * |
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Re: Poor Fairy Princess
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by silent_wolf_tear on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:45:26 PM AEST
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| this is a great, yet kinda sad write, but great job i like it |
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Re: Poor Fairy Princess
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:39:31 PM AEST
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Ah, beautiful poem. I can relate well to her pain inside. She is a beauty and you described her well. Your imagery was perfect.
Smiles,
Rita |
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