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Avian Shores*
Contributed by
Glo
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:02:18 PM in AEST
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Seagulls drift above...
Upon the sultry trade winds,
Along sandy shores.
~Gloria E. 08-July-2004
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Glo
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2004-07-08 13:02:18]
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Re: Avian Shores*
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by Gentledove on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:07:17 PM AEST
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I love your Haikus. This one is very nice. I love the challenge of saying so much with so little.
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Re: Avian Shores*
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:32:19 PM AEST
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Ah, Gloria, what lovely memories this brought back to mind. I remember spending weekends at the beach just walking down the boardwalk, the little cafes and watching the seagulls float on air and the pelicans perched on the docs. You created a real visual image in my mind. Excellent work.
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Re: Avian Shores*
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:39:19 PM AEST
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My second haiku in a row!!!
Very well done I might add!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Avian Shores*
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:26:56 PM AEST
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Nice: in 3 lines youve captured the seagull.
Good write |
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Re: Avian Shores*
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:55:12 PM AEST
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| great write once again. |
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