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Suffered the butterfly
Contributed by
Aika
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:03:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A flower grew and butterfly sat on
And spread her wings around
When flower started to go after
those butterflys wings to scribble
Butterfly wished to stand the pain
She hoped it would be flowers arrogance
But with the poison stuck butterflys legs
And her tongue was also ate
Very weak already, hard was to move
From the sun sucking power and valour
She defied and tried to get free
Wanted to learn from the trick flowery
Wings changed in so soft web
She only plod leg by leg
Eyes cried out into emptiness
In desert can not find flowers
She would scream, yet has no voice
Heart barely beats, and dark universe
Lightened the lamps on heavens path
Butterfly, without nectar, soon you die
Mouth for the last gasped out
And in desert ghost soared
How happily she sat on flower
Why she had, why had to suffer?
Vyrostla květina a na n motlek
Rozprostřel pr svch křidlek
Květina nhle začla se spat
Křidlka malmu motlku drpat
Motlek tu bolest snel tie
Neb doufal e patř ke květině pe
Leč i noky mu slepila svm jedem
I jeho jazček zůstal mu polepen
Ji slab, sotva se hbaje
Ze slunka odvahu a slu saje
Vzpouz se a sna oprostit
Ze lsti t květiny sm sebe poučit
Z křidlek jenom pavučinky tenk
Noky sotva se vlečou v trvě vysok
Oči do przdna vyplakan
V pouti sotva květinu najde
Volal by, leč nem ani hlas
Srdčko sotva tepe, obloha temn zas
Rozsvěc lampičky cesty do rje
Motlku, zemře, květiny nemaje
sta dnes naposled vydechla vzduch
Z motlka v pouti vznesl se duch
Jak radostně nedvno dosedl na květ,
Proč jen ten maličk, proč musel trpět?
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-07-08 15:03:45]
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Re: Suffered the butterfly
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by Archie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:20:26 PM AEST
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| A surprisingly good read. |
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Re: Suffered the butterfly
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by neglected1 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:01:09 PM AEST
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i really enjoy'd reading this... keep up the good work..
luck to you
~neglected1~ |
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Re: Suffered the butterfly
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:50:06 PM AEST
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Oh Aika, the poor little thing,
How very sad for the pretty little butterfly
I'm so glad everything came out all right in the end.
I liked the ending, Why did she have to suffer?
Well written and so sad and then glad.
Love you
consue |
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Re: Suffered the butterfly
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:29:09 PM AEST
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SO SAD BUT WAS WRITTEN WITH HEART & BEAUTY! SORRY TO HEAR OF YOUR MOTHERS SICKNESS!! PLEASE STAY STRONG WITH HER TOGETHER!!! WE HAVE LOVE OF GREAT LENGTHS FOR BOTH OF YOU MY FRIEND,& A TOUCH OF STRENGTHS AS TO NO ENDS!!!!
LOL~DAN!!!!! |
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