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the end of my sappy trilogy...hopefully
Contributed by
trippflip
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:55:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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twilight beaming like a tractor beam
i wonder how i can play my scheme
i hate this way we play
i dont want this to stay
i'm gonna make you understand
are you just playing your game
i want to command
beacause resenting wont lead to fame
why is you mood lame
what or who is to blame
you make me feel some shame
i'm out of my mind and
too unsane to keep to myself
in my head instead, but that has to change
i love these times
where i can pour out my mind through this pen and paper
these moments i'll savor
false friendliness, but still i think otherwise
because it seems true
i need something else
if i am wasting my time i get bored then i leave and forget
what if we never met
this is what my sub-conscience((?)) thinks...
i wouldn't be able to put this to word
***the dreams that i've had
are all too sad
to share and feed to you pity
i dont need that***
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trippflip
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2004-07-08 18:55:03]
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Re: the end of my sappy trilogy...hopefully
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:55:05 PM AEST
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| great write. especially the last part. =] |
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Re: the end of my sappy trilogy...hopefully
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:07:16 AM AEST
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Excellent.
5 stars.
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