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Pulchritudinous Vampire
Contributed by
WestCPunk
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:13:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In the eerie substratum of the obscurity
You seek a terrorizing creature
Who has written crimson scriptures
All over the wall
Something is going to befall
"Thy Love for Life"
Written in blood
Curse the Holy water
That lies in that reservoir
I will be seen as forever morbid
I lurk towards you in the shadows
You are fascinated by my pulchritudinous
The grimace of your face
Makes my atrocious heart race
So I suggest you run
It won't be long before I seduce you
Unless you are brave enough to explore
The kind of things Vampires like to do!
Copyright ©
WestCPunk
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2004-07-08 20:13:37]
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Re: Pulchritudinous Vampire
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:23:19 PM AEST
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I am sure it is just my live in the light attitude but somehow, beauty and vampire just do not seem to fit in the same category.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Pulchritudinous Vampire
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:00:44 PM AEST
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HERE! I'm commenting on your crappy poem! Are you happy now?
J/k, this is really good, I like it. |
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Re: Pulchritudinous Vampire
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by MLCstar on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:28:12 PM AEST
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| Mysterious and compelling. Call me a dark, tormented, twisted sould but I enjoy stuff like this. Another great poem. Keep it up. |
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Re: Pulchritudinous Vampire
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by darkfairy1188 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:12:25 PM AEST
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| i disagree, i believe beauty and vampyre definately fall in the same category. i thought this was an excellent poem. of course this is comming from a vampyre freak. by-the-way, WestCPunk as in SLC Punk? i love that movie. |
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Re: Pulchritudinous Vampire
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by slayer_015 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:34:48 AM AEST
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Ah!!!! the vampire,an immortal romantic to say the least,and beauty and vampire most definitely go together.Great poem.Keep it up.
Brian
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Re: Pulchritudinous Vampire
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by arden on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:38:06 PM AEST
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whoa shelbi this was awesome.
a really good vampire poem. dark and chilling. great use of words in this. i really liked it.
Becky |
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