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Tormenting the Executioner
Contributed by
norticus
on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Send down the executioner. I'm ready to go.
Got my head on the tie so take your last blow.
You held your case; my guilt's been proved.
Next on the list; my head to be removed.
So send in the executioner. It's time I depart.
He can have my head; she got the heart.
Oh Hi! You're here nice of you to come.
We almost started without ya' you big dumb bum.
Now lift up your hand and pull down the lever
Make that blade fall my head to sever.
There you go friend. You got the trick.
Drop that blade so my neck splits.
You're not so bad. Here i...
jz
Copyright ©
norticus
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2002-10-24 11:30:00]
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Re: Tormenting the Executioner
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by Fwog on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 04:24:40 PM AEST
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Norticus, what can one say, brilliant
You Rock |
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Re: Tormenting the Executioner
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 10:39:08 AM AEST
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| I love this poem...it sends chills to the corners of my twisted brain... |
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Re: Tormenting the Executioner
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by Kiz on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:54:00 PM AEST
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| Not one of your greatest ones i have to say. Funny in places, but not ur usual passion that draws me to you. Kiz's scale: 2.69 |
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