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Smile
Contributed by
Sinful_Misery
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:10:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A passionate kiss, and a gleeful smile,
The relationship is there, but in turn is so vile,
Acceptance is virtue, but rather profound,
The existence is there, so clear and so loud,
To ponder the meaning, and distinguish its truth,
Can complicate matters, and become quite uncouth,
The constriction of thoughts, and feelings both alike,
Bring chaos and tribulation, to that of the psyche,
With emotions and concepts, coming from the heart of a child,
I looked into your eyes; and in turn,
you smiled.
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2004-07-08 22:10:31]
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Re: Smile
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by Seans_Girl on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:03:08 AM AEST
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I decided to comment on one of your poems because you commented on one of mine. I chose this one because it didn't have any comments yet. It is very sweet and romantic. Keep up the good work.
*~Natalie~* |
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