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Insomnia
Contributed by
MLCstar
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:01:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I sit, woken, never dreaming
Vastly tired, but cannot rest
Wait for peace that will not come.
Now lying in the chilling darkness
Its taunting, jeering, at my plight
I toss and turn without avail
Is it any use to try?
Checking the rude clock with sleepless eyes
I grow wearier as time crawls
Silence is now loudly laughing
As I lie here, I start to wonder,
Are dreams better than what is real?
Will sleep still this endless night?
Copyright ©
MLCstar
... [
2004-07-08 23:01:11]
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Re: Insomnia
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by darkfairy1188 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:05:46 PM AEST
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i know. insomnia sux a*%.
~Sara |
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Re: Insomnia
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:37:36 AM AEST
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dude this is great! I know this all to well...been goin through it for a long time...especialy last night! i just kept tossing and turning, and thinking!
Great Poem!
please comment on my work too
Summer |
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Re: Insomnia
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:51:56 AM AEST
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I hear ya..
Thats why i am here on this site late at night.
good write..:-) |
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Re: Insomnia
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by tifrob on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:24:14 AM AEST
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It's 2:45 a.m. you must of writen this poem for a lot of us. I'm supposed to be writing a poem for a mother whose daughter is getting married. Here I sit reading poetry...lol Great poem by the way.
J~ |
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Re: Insomnia
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:56:28 PM AEST
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vivid and oh so true:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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