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My Intuition
Contributed by
Pollo_Picante1120
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:20:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Him and I on a cloud above
Joined by signs of puppy love
Mutual letters of burning lust
My Intuition made me trust
Night sparkles upon a joyful kiss
Darkened day by a hurtful diss
Running back to the young and weak
This broken heart, painfully it leaks
Intuition that made it fall
Voices blocked with no returned call
Sunshine reflects upon this skin
But cloudy days develop within
He gave me wings so I could fly
Then drowned my soul with the tears I cry
My Intuition that seemed so right
But My Intuition dimmed this loving light
Copyright ©
Pollo_Picante1120
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2004-07-09 02:20:37]
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Re: My Intuition
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by tifrob on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:36:01 AM AEST
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Actually I like it. I truly enjoy rythemic poetry. You have that. You did good. I'll look you up again.
J~ |
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Re: My Intuition
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by neh on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:51:12 AM AEST
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| luvely poem indeed,butifully fabricated n yet so simple that 1 can relate it.gr8 wrk!!!!!best wishes. |
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