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Insomnia pt.2
Contributed by
Living_In_my_dream
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:57:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Crumbling walls caused
By rivers of salty water.
A barrier falls,
Bricks no longer hold strong,
Concrete turns to dust.
Clouds descend,
Covering the bright horizon
Sun is blocked by enclosing leaves.
Grass in the field grows
Faster than you can walk;
Hard soil collapses beneath your heavy steps.
Where is the wind to blow the clouds away?
Why suddenly banished from the day?
So, night falls,
The sandman creeps through open windows,
Greeting dreams,
Creating nightmares.
All shadows merge
Into unified blackness
Until even the stars lose their fire.
See me tumbling down -
The hole in the safety net
Steadily follows
The pattern of ladders
In cheap tights.
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Living_In_my_dream
... [
2004-07-09 02:57:22]
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Re: Insomnia pt.2
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by rugby_player on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:08:38 PM AEST
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| again nicely done...i love your writing..and you were write this is different from your others......this is more complex |
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