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Siren's Song
Contributed by
luinil
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 06:11:57 AM in AEST
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Two hearts play out their cadence
Gasping breaths sing of longing
Quivering hands conduct a symphony
Tasting your song
A deepening rhythm
Rushing a heightened harmony
Lusts melody pulses tonight
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luinil
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2004-07-09 06:11:57]
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Re: Siren's Song
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by Dupa on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:45:15 AM AEST
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| Great! I love the way you threaded love together like a symphony. |
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Re: Siren's Song
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:47:01 AM AEST
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wwwoooo!!
very well said and hot!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Siren's Song
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:32:01 AM AEST
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very descriptive moment-
nice job. |
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