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Too late
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:06:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Looking in the past
at all the mistakes I made
my own judgement day.
Copyright ©
jackee_line
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2004-07-09 08:06:44]
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Re: Too late
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:39:45 AM AEST
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| Where's the rest of the poem? |
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Re: Too late
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:47:10 AM AEST
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Good Haiku, Jackee... Maybe the reason will become evident soon....
To lovespoetic0518: THAT is the poem.... That's a haiku..made up of 3 lines with 5-7-5 syllable stress pattern.
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Re: Too late
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by OMEGA_ on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:44:41 AM AEST
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| really well expressed Hiku |
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Re: Too late
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:43:57 AM AEST
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| great haiku - these are so difficult to write and get fullness. I enjoyed this. |
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Re: Too late
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by Gentledove on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:55:24 PM AEST
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I love Haiku. This is a very nice wrtie about your past.
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Re: Too late
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:44:30 PM AEST
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excellent:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Too late
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:52:16 PM AEST
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| amazing haiku. |
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Re: Too late
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by Broken-Suicide on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:54:52 AM AEST
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| Its good but try to make it longer. |
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Re: Too late
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by sararose1950 on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 04:44:27 PM AEST
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awesome indeed!! simplicity at its finest!
judgement day is ours alone, well said.
Peace and Light |
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