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I am his mother
Contributed by
chong1
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:15:50 AM in AEST
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2/13/2004-
I am his mother
Do not judge me for what i have done
For you have not walked in my shoes
He is not your son
You don't love him and long for him
As much as I do, and always will
You did not feel him and plan for him
And know him and promise him that
You would always take care of him
As i will
He is my son
You did not hear the doctors say
That he will be special
That he already is special
And that he will be special untill
The day he dies
You did not pray to God for the
Third ultrosound would comfirm
Your hopes that he would be healthy
You did not see the tears
In the doctors eyes when he
Comfirmed the diagnosis
You did not pray to God for
Him to never have to suffer
For him to take Brandon to Heaven
Where there would be no pain
You didn't feel his pain
I did I am his mother
When you simply said to me
That i don't have the right
To keep his life
I know you did not feel my struggle
When you simply said to me
That i don't have to keep his life
For him to be happy
I know you did not feel his struggle
I do not know what God wants for him
I do not have his wisdom
And neither do you
I do know that he loves me
I felt his love through the people
He gave me
I know that God did feel my struggle
All i ask for you know
Is that you tell me I am his mother
And do not jugde me for who I am
Or what i have done
For you have not walked in my shoes
Or carried him this far
For I am his mother
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chong1
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Re: I am his mother
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by tbird on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:11:05 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem. There is a divine plan for all us and that is not for any of US to say.
Sending good health, peace and love your way
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Re: I am his mother
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:49:39 AM AEST
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Really touching....I feel your pain......
Jenni |
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Re: I am his mother
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:51:36 AM AEST
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Your pain is evident. Revel in the strength and wisdom of God and forge ahead in your love for your son and know that there is rhyme and reason for God's decision. My heart goes out to you.
Rita |
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Re: I am his mother
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:12:15 AM AEST
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wonderful expressive write. We can never guess what God's plan is, we can only have faith in His wisdom.
Lovely, and painful |
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Re: I am his mother
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by frohemiasweetie on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:11:21 PM AEST
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| Oh my God. I am speechless at a keyboard. That was an amazing poem. Absolutely, I loved it. Peace, and if is factual admission, God loves you and everything will be okay, nothing is bad forever. Beautiful poem. I have experience in the feeling of absolute responsibility over someone when that was not the initial intention. Loved this poem. |
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Re: I am his mother
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by babygirl2004 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:36:17 PM AEST
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| omg tears is all i have to say great poem |
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Re: I am his mother
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by backstreetdreamer on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:24:52 AM AEST
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| Hello Jackee, Keith here. This is a wonderful poem, it made me cry . You obviously have the same outlook on life as I do. God bless! |
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Re: I am his mother
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by VanHaggar on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:55:05 PM AEST
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| i am his father who love's him and will guide him for as long as i live and i did feel the same as u did u just failed to realize any =thing past your own feeling o never once wanted to end anything i just want to be apart of his life thanks for the bashing i only hope this justifies everything and you can stop lying love ya lots |
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Re: I am his mother
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by VanHaggar on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:55:06 PM AEST
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| i am his father who love's him and will guide him for as long as i live and i did feel the same as u did u just failed to realize any =thing past your own feeling o never once wanted to end anything i just want to be apart of his life thanks for the bashing i only hope this justifies everything and you can stop lying love ya lots |
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by VanHaggar on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:55:12 PM AEST
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| i am his father who love's him and will guide him for as long as i live and i did feel the same as u did u just failed to realize any =thing past your own feeling o never once wanted to end anything i just want to be apart of his life thanks for the bashing i only hope this justifies everything and you can stop lying love ya lots |
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Re: I am his mother
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by VanHaggar on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:55:39 PM AEST
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| i am his father who love's him and will guide him for as long as i live and i did feel the same as u did u just failed to realize any =thing past your own feeling o never once wanted to end anything i just want to be apart of his life thanks for the bashing i only hope this justifies everything and you can stop lying love ya lots |
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Re: I am his mother
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by booboo on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:50:25 PM AEST
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i hope brandon doesn't grow up like you,if he does oh sh*t!hes my nephew,hes my brothers son,jamies not just a spirm donner like you're making it sound like he is,as much as you like to lie you might wanna stop,i think you're just looking for sympathy from all these ppl on this site,well guess what i've been around since day 1 and jamie is brandons father,unless you did cheat on jamie,if you did the rumours are true,and if thats the case i don't think you should come around jamie anymore,thats just not cool,anyways i'm gonna ask a favor and thats to stop bashing jamie and if you're gonna start bashing me or anybody else that is close to me think twice about it,i blame you for my moms crippitalism!
if this poem were true i might say something good about it but since nothing was true i'm just gonna go to the hospital
bye booboo |
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Re: I am his mother
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:35:28 PM AEST
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dunno who 2 believe,u have 2 ppl commenting on this whatever u wanna call it of urs,saying that this is a lie,i don't know who u r,but i've seen their poems and urs and it sounds like they have it worste then u,and i know what its like to have someone lie about urself,u could help urself and them by not lying,and ur son don't let him grow up without a father i 2 know what thats like and its not easy,take care
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Re: I am his mother
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:18:13 AM AEST
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This is really good.
It made me wonder if my mother(not my biological one) can ever feel the same way , but it's good.
-glass |
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