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Now for you I shed my tears
Contributed by
Chicken
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Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Now for you I shed my tears
Because you have voiced my deepest fear.
I wanted only to show you the way,
That I found my first love one day.
I can't stop you from finding out what lies,
On my heart, down deep inside.
I only want you to find joy,
And I thought maybe it would be in a boy.
But I was wrong, that point I concede,
Can you find it in your heart to forgive me?
Copyright ©
Chicken
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2002-10-24 13:45:00]
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Re: Now for you I shed my tears
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 01:52:42 PM AEST
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You know the answer to that one andrew... it's sitting in your inbox... LOL. Hun, you know that we differ on our points of view, but never let your tears fall over me, and my sad state... let them fall over something more important in this life... Trust me... you need to save your tears!!!
Great write, as always,
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Re: Now for you I shed my tears
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:47:46 AM AEST
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This is beautiful..I really like it... Hope you find that forgiveness.....
Jenni |
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