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Lake Of Tears
Contributed by
Elf
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:11:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The sun sinks down
across the lake.
As motionless and beautiful
as the sunset above.
I sit on the shores
of my beautiful lake
Silent but screaming
of my sorrows and strife.
But none but a tear
disturb the picture here.
Adding another drop
to my lake of tears.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-07-09 15:11:10]
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Re: Lake Of Tears
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by waos on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:27:02 PM AEST
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| that's really good. simple and yet it really seems to show the beauty... at least to me. good job |
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Re: Lake Of Tears
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by lilch4ever on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:35:31 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem it was good. Another great poem. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Lake Of Tears
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by full_blur on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:42:43 PM AEST
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| well done, I like the way your poem progresses and ends with beautiful imagery. |
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