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Dead man laughing
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:30:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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His life was taken away as he fell from grace
but as he fell there was a smile upon his face
soon from him hell would be shared
his favorite color is crimson
soon he will paint crimson on there faces
dead man laughing
they all think theyve won
he is going to share his nighmares
the apocolypse is drawing near
he will chew on them but never swallow
dead man laughing
no hero will save them now
evil is attacking
evil is swallowing faith and purging fear
he will take the world apart piece by piece
every child is screaming for their mothers
but there mothers have abandoned them
dead man laughing
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2004-07-09 19:30:57]
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Re: Dead man laughing
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by waos on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:26:30 PM AEST
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| it's good. dark too. which sometimes is best, what suits our moods best. good job. |
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Re: Dead man laughing
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 12:01:44 PM AEST
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This was brilliant, my kinda thing.
I love every bit of it, so dark and evil..
Its great
BS x |
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