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Empty
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:46:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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sitting alone her giving me to much time to think
i thought iwas out of this but im stumbling back in
its back
this empty nothing i cant describe
i am powerless
i am hopeless
and i dont know why
its empty pain
no feeling of belonging
deep inside
my heart is throbbing
no emotion
corrupt thoughts
no devotion
not caring what happens
just sitting here
empty
not wanting to go anywhere
not wanting to do anything
waiting to see if it will stop
overcome by exhaustion
my life is shattered into a thousand pieces
no more happy songs
no more laughing
just starting all over again
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brokensoul
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2004-07-09 19:46:20]
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Re: Empty
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by comfortablynumb on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:56:12 PM AEST
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| I can understand that feeling of hopeless emptiness- you desribed perfectly how i feel sometimes but never knew how to explain... thanks! |
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Re: Empty
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by waos on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:14:22 PM AEST
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| i can totally relate to that too. so often you think its finally going to get better, but no. it all drops again and buries you. but hey, at least we have some moments where it isn't there right? you did a really good job writing it. |
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Re: Empty
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:41:25 PM AEST
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a captured moment; so human..... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Empty
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:13:38 PM AEST
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Just a word to encourage you. Get Up Dudder Feel and look around
look for even the smallest smile
or the fainst hint of laughter . it takes practice but gets easier with time.
Whisper |
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