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The Temptress
Contributed by
wray
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:54:38 PM in AEST
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Forgive me, my light one,
I do not know this path;
I fear the dark is beckoning
And weaker shall I last.
To live in cornered shadows;
To feel the mistened lights
That warn me, death is looming near,
Betwixt the shadowed nights.
The nighttime is a temptress,
I know her scent too well
That fatal drawn seduction
Whose depths I cannot tell.
She comforts me, and draws me close,
So darker so I find
The world around me, beaten in
To cluster in my mind.
I did not seek this shelter,
I did not seek to rule.
Her it was, forsaken me
Once tempted, twice a fool.
I must repel her clutches for
She dizzies me with love;
For nighttime is a temptress,
And I, a strangled dove.
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Re: The Temptress
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:03:15 PM AEST
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| lovely, i enjoyed this poem... |
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Re: The Temptress
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:54:33 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Temptress
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:54:27 PM AEST
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Wow, this is impressive. Such strong rhythm, lustrous rhymes...and a dark message delivered with both flair and depth. I'm glad to have read this, as it's a polished piece of great poetry.
Beheaded with a steak knife,
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Re: The Temptress
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by Black13 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:24:13 AM AEST
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Ooooh, beautiful imagery.
I enjoyed this piece Wray.
Very nice flow to it. |
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