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I Love You Too
Contributed by
Sinful_Misery
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:37:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Fiction at its worst,
Reality at its best,
Gazing though the time,
Memories of the best
Situating the facts,
Separating the fake,
Making all of this work,
Everything of me to take,
Lies turn to truth,
Stories turn to songs,
Everlasting love,
That of which I long,
Take me to paradise,
Take away the hate,
I need someone in my life,
That isn't one to rate
When I feel the strength,
To express my love for you,
I hope to hear the words,
"And I love you too"
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Sinful_Misery
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2004-07-09 23:37:58]
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Re: I Love You Too
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:14:07 AM AEST
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| Nice: lovely ending.. rhyme is good too.. |
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Re: I Love You Too
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by pixie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:38:30 AM AEST
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great write........lovely,
pixie xx |
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