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Find Me
Contributed by
kimmany
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:16:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I find myself thinking of you smile and your crystal blue eyes that make life worth living.
I find myself believing that you love me and breath as one with me.
I find myself wrapped up in your arms and feeling safe in your presence and then I find
myself lost and laughing, because I have yet to find you.
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2004-07-10 00:16:08]
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Re: Find Me
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by C2C on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:30:03 AM AEST
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| lol, got me laughing on that last line of your poem. How True! Dreaming of Prince Charming(or princess) and it's great for the moment, but when you think about it, you can't help but laugh. Love the honesty. Great job. |
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Re: Find Me
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by TheRaven on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 01:06:19 AM AEST
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so true, so true. awesome job, very refreshing...loved the last line also
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Re: Find Me
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by veruca on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:28:25 AM AEST
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UMMM...I WAS A LITTLE CONFUSED AFTER READING THIS BUT THEN READING THE OTHERS COMENTS I READ IT OVER AGAIN THINKING THAT THOUGHT THEN IT CAME TO ME......I HAVE HAD THE SAME THING HAPPEN TO ME EVERY DAY.....GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOV YA,
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Re: Find Me
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:59:16 AM AEST
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So true, so true. I can really relate to this one.
Welcome to the site!! |
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Re: Find Me
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by OMEGA_ on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:08:37 AM AEST
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really deep and great
well done |
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Re: Find Me
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by arden on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 12:20:25 AM AEST
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lol yeah i agree, loved the last line, true and honest. lovely poem. i enjoyed this one *smiles*
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