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Ghosts
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 01:17:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I could hardly believe it when the said you were gone.
I didn't here anything except you were never coming home.
So many times tears had fallen from these eyes.
but now they fall all the long gone tries..
I tried to be perfect.
I tried to be good.
did everything a good woman should.
Made love to you all night long.
Felt our love growing to be so strong.
Felt you behind me,
when i knew it couldn't be.
I feel you hold me when I cry.
I know your still near.
Even though I can't see your body.
I feel you when I try to sleep.
Feel the love we had that was so deep.
I feel you when I am all alone.
How can it be if your dead and gone
I feel you in the sun on my face.
I feel you in the dark of night
Like your still here holding me tight.
I know your soul lives on
I know your heart was just to strong to kill
Because i feel your love... STILL
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brokenwings
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2004-07-10 01:17:33]
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Re: Ghosts
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by pixie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:37:29 AM AEST
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awww this is beautiful and sad all in the same breath,
pixie xx |
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Re: Ghosts
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:11:45 PM AEST
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Oh I hope you don't mind me saying this, but I think the title of this should be"Your breath all around me" That is what I sensed as I read this. It is a beautiful poem and warrants many more reads. People are expecting a ghost story, but this is beauty!!! I loved the essence of these words. May he never leave you!
Angel always...joni |
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