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Open Those Beautiful Eyes
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:16:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Babe... how can I make you open up those beautiful eyes?
How can I make you see and realize?
This life that you're starting to lead...
These wild ways..
You think you need...
Are gonna lead you ... not to a life of fun and excitement
But to a life that's out of control...
One that's full of danger... and self destruction... and pain
Then you're gonna wake up one day
Out on the edge of some place... you don't wanna be...
And you're finally going to realize...
Those who love you... were right after all...
But will it be too late?
Will you already be caught in the fall?
Babe... your life is headed down a one way street
You're hell bent on living on the edge of life... at full speed
How can I make you open those beautiful eyes and realize...
It's where those who love you... have already been
We've already seen...
We already know...
It's not a pretty site... living on the edge of out of control
Babe... please... I implore you..
Open those beautiful eyes for me...
And look deep into mine...
See love's light shine...just for you...
It's a love that is going to be here... always and forever...
This is true...
Babe... it's what you're needing in your life...
Open those beautiful eyes... and know and realize...
What you've got right in front of you...
Someone who loves you...
More than life itself...
More than you'll ever know
This is one heart that can't let go...
It has been touched too deeply
But can't let it show...
It has to let you go your own way thru life
Babe... please... open those beautiful eyes?
Let me see the love that lies
Behind those beautiful eyes...
Let it shine through...
'Cause I know it's there... I've seen it before
With just one look... one glimpse inside
Babe... speak to me with those beautiful eyes
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Re: Open Those Beautiful Eyes
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by diamond_tears on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 09:47:17 AM AEST
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| this was nice!! i hope she opens those beautiful eyes :) |
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Re: Open Those Beautiful Eyes
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 01:59:02 AM AEST
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This is so touching, and heartfelt! I certainly will pray but for whom? This poem is so different, I like the way you repeated the same phrase over and over again for emphasis........made it very endearing indeed!
Great poem
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Re: Open Those Beautiful Eyes
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 10:42:34 PM AEST
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Jus keep luving her no matter what she does and she will stay open to u it's tose that judge us that do the most damage. She will have her days of reckoning and u wonna be there to help her thru it. this is abeautifull gift to her that she will cherish in time.
I know where she's comming from and u do too but it amazing to me how much wisdom u have in your head and heart.
there's gonna always be those that prey on th weak but in the end she will come out stronger and much wiser as u have and then in turn her experiences will help others. wham u have a chain reaction of good that has copme out of hell itself but Jesus paid her price at clavry.
Keep luving her. I'm so proud of you.
yo otha momma,
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