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Nothing Here, (i am...)
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:18:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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See, now I
don't know why
I am...
...why must i be the way i am...
(I cry) and i tear
(from my fear) at my hair
See, now I
look inside myself
to see nothing, nothing
good,
nothing here, I am
ugly, I am
repulsive and unattractive...
nothing here, I am
ugly, I am
repulsive and unattractive...
I am
bitter, I am hate,
I am contorted face of pale fury,
I am eyes of shadowed death...
Naked, shivering,
I hunch in the corner, dark,
defiant, Evil.
(bones and soul are twisted)
I need no one, my
arms around my knees
feel this genetalia, please...
(Still another 65
years to go, to be alive...??
Oh God, no...)
I am Yellow, I am tear,
I am dripping off this wooden picinic table...
drip
drip
drip
drip
drip
Drop.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-07-10 02:18:31]
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Re: Nothing Here, (i am...)
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:08:00 AM AEST
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Very dark, i love your style so much, although the inspiration comes from something bad..
Still this was very good
Gem x |
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Re: Nothing Here, (i am...)
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 03:38:44 AM AEST
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| Ah, I've missed reading your poetry...very dark and eerie but powerful all the same. Kudos. |
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Re: Nothing Here, (i am...)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 04:55:16 PM AEST
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This one is a masterpiece...there's no other word for it, well there are, excellent, breathtaking, inspirational but I'm sure you get the picture. Great write on this
Take care
- Becca |
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