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Seldom Walked
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Minutes and days and hours have ticked by
Time without you drags on and on
I watch the clock tick and the sun set,
Then I miserably glare through blurry eyes as it rises again.
One minute is one minute too long
When I am not near you.
I am impatient, excited, and anxious to hear
Your gentle voice.
Your voice
Your voice melts me and warms me and heals me
As it soothes the boisterous waters that have
Boiled me to a hot misery.
Your voice moisturizes my scaly, cracked
Heart.
How I long for such surreal restoration
But I know it is a love, a dream, a hope
Worth any wait which life demands.
My entire being loves you and only you.
So thank you.
For the amazing road you've taken me on.
The road of love--
A road seldom walked.
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Re: Seldom Walked
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:05:14 PM AEST
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To walk with you down that path is going to be the best thing in life, well at least this one. It's more than I've dreamed of, more than I hoped for. I miss you and love you so much.
Take care, my Love.
David |
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Re: Seldom Walked
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:24:03 PM AEST
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May your travels be smooth and may you never get blisters on your toes as you walk the road of love.
Lots of LOVE and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Seldom Walked
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:01:46 PM AEST
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Wow! Big words for just a kid. Nice job! This was artistic. And rather far gone... but ah well. You deserve it.
A blessing on your love, Ceima.
Andrew
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Re: Seldom Walked
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:44:25 AM AEST
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Carrie your writing is just incredible!
haha, 22! |
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Re: Seldom Walked
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:34:04 PM AEST
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Awww . . . oh, geez, you've got me all lipbitten and sniffly here. Heh . . . seriously, this is such a sweet poem; so very beautiful . . . *smiles* nicely done.
--Nora |
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