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Alone not wanted.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:19:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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One night not to ask Although the time has past A night we were to share But you not to bare I sat there waiting My sister gone to have some fun As you sit and drink And make me think This one night I thought for us We to have as all of us To live a life we once had To much to be loved I guess As I watched you embarass yourself Reapeat the words im almost done I wont spend my night watching You waste your life with no ones around I pulled out the knife It looked sweet just one slice A feeling of unwanted Oh ive never wanted But its always haunted I cant rid of it At least the one who helps me came in Before I commited an awful sin For her alone reminds me That there are few that love me
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Re: Alone not wanted.
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:42:14 AM AEST (User
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very sad write, i am sorry for your pain...... you are loved,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Alone not wanted.
(User Rating: 1 ) by InnerBeautyQueen on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 01:03:35 AM AEST (User
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ssssooooo sad. im glad there's someone there to remind you. |
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Re: Alone not wanted.
(User Rating: 1 ) by shorty_52 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:09:32 PM AEST (User
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hey babe. i'm glad that i came into ur life to make u not do that. u r loved and she loves u to. always remember that. she may not show it at times but she duz luv u. think on that and don't bring it up to me. i know what u would say. well talk to u later. luv u bunchez.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Alone not wanted.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 07:26:49 PM AEST (User
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yes there is always the one person that actually cares or loves you! like you said to me before...if you ever need to talk hit me up...pyrofungus@hotmail.com
please comment on my work too
summer |
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