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3.00am
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:46:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Outside the rain is falling
Youre sending shivers down my spine
My digital clock reads 3am
And I can hear you breathing
As I lay here unable to move
I can hear you whispering
Is it wrong for me to love you?
You wish that I was strong
Im sorry that I begged you for help
That I cried last night
Im still lying here, listening to your angry whispers
Is it really my fault or are you too afraid to blame yourself?
And I lay here unmoved
As your voice wavers, getting louder and louder
As your eyes bore into the side of my burning cheek
Begging me for the answer of what went wrong
I am your little girl, your little prototype gone wrong
My digital clock reads 1pm
I cant breathe
You're still staring
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Re: 3.00am
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:15:51 AM AEST
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| wow i cant believe im the first to comment on this. this is great it really makes sence i can feel all the emotion! |
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Re: 3.00am
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by pixie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:27:11 AM AEST
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very emotional write.....*hugs you*
pixie xx |
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Re: 3.00am
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by Stoney1 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:44:34 PM AEST
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Yes, it's very impolite to stare.*g*
Good poem!
Stoney |
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