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yours only
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:34:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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chew me up spit me out because i truly don't care anymore stand on my pride rip out this heart of mine please hurt me cos i can't feel it anymore please make sure i,m not breathing when you close the door leave me to bleed and please watch as my blood drips to the floor looking rite through me as i plead for you to love me looking down at me as if i,m am nobody to you to them i am nothing
such a pretty mouth but the words that come out are so ugly such a pretty face but the pain it causes no one deserves such a kind face but your heart full of disgrace this pain i tried to cure those words hurt so much i had no choice but to ignore but now that you stabbed me in the black you decided those words wer'nt worthy for me anymore i am no one i am nothing but deep down you know you cannot break this bond because its in our blood but you can still tel yourself i am nothing i am no one to you but deep down you know i am yours dearly yours only i was bought into this world by you.
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Re: yours only
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mihiri on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:55:15 AM AEST (User
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Very angry indeed! But there's something that's more visible than 'ur anger i this poem... TaLeNt!! Keep up da gd wrk! Lots'a crazZzy grins, Mihiri |
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Re: yours only
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnastasiaN on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:16:57 PM AEST (User
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i don't know how to rate poems. what's the range? but i would definitely give this one a good rating. the right angry words can say a lot... |
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