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Just...
Contributed by
loopylou
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:32:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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just anouther tear anouther night anouther day
i hold myself together
because i know im the one who's got to be ok
and for once i feel strong
even in my crying state
because i know im still living
and havent given in to this hate
this is just anouther thing that you can do and i cant
its just anouther dream shatter
but ill get over it
and pretend it never matterd
i feel worthless and degarded
with this self hate ive created
i have too many flaws now
and there chilising me away
i open my mouth to speak
but i cant explaine what i want to say
every day i wish i was normal
and hate because i feel so alone
i hate this slipping and sliding
because i know im loosing controll
no more demands that i cant follow
its time to give up
because as much as i try
i cant be good enough
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2004-07-11 13:32:00]
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Re: Just...
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by Ryoko on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:38:24 PM AEST
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its good! kinda sounds like your writting from personal experience or about someone! i like it alot!
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Re: Just...
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by mdmorash on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:08:57 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. |
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