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Erased
Contributed by
Ecly
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:40:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Walls of obscure and borders beyond,
Reaching for many when none respond.
Deeper it goes and higher I rise,
This warm release, emotional reprise.
Carry me far and tell no one my sin,
Working so hard to change from within.
Deeper it goes and farther I fall.
A moment's escape, makes you feel small.
Speaking the silence you'd never hear,
Caught in this moment a visceral tear.
Deeper it goes and pain will abide,
The beauty of numb as seen from outside.
Eternity is infinite to one such as I,
An existence so small, staring into the sky.
Deeper it goes and all you can think,
We never suspected, yet I still sink.
Copyright ©
Ecly
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2004-07-11 13:40:19]
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Re: Erased
(User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:52:00 PM AEST
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| a great grasp of english and a really nice polished poem - 5/5 |
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