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which world do i want
Contributed by
co_cane13
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:44:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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a world i created and then choose to leave
a life i made, then decided it wasn't for me
and now that i've left and want to return
i can't, because i've started a life with all new concerns
now that i'm here and realized what i've lost
i see my decisions and what they have cost
i gave up my friends, family, and girl
just because i didn't like certain parts of my world
i never thought of the things i would miss
a hello, a goodbye, a good morning kiss
and the more i think about life without you
the more i think what did i do
did i make a mistake by leaving you there
did i lose you by choice is my biggest fear
did i ruin our chance of being together
did i ruin my dream of loving you forever
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Re: which world do i want
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:59:53 PM AEST
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| a lovely melloncollie piece nice couplets and some nice ideas in this piece |
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