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Days As Weeks
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:58:25 PM in AEST
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Days ssem to pass by as weeks
You can no longer remember when it happened
Argue with me
You think you right,
But hun your not so stop the fight!
I'll lend you my wisdom
For you don't understand
Your concept of time
Is not our kind!
This miserable face that holds you back
Does not understand
The negative times
Your reality is different
Different from ours
You don't notice whats wrong
You don't see it coming!
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pyrofungus
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2004-07-11 13:58:25]
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Re: Days As Weeks
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 02:03:28 PM AEST
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| a powerful poem |
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Re: Days As Weeks
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:39:49 AM AEST
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| well written..venkat |
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Re: Days As Weeks
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 07:11:26 PM AEST
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i know people as dumb as you mention in this... they never see it comming until it's too late, or maybe they do, they just choose to iggnore it, hoping the curse will pass, depite the fact that it often doesn't!
i respect you for talking to others. i just close up. i can't see the point in repeating my-self. i'v done it too many times and now it's all too much for me to handle so i don't tell others about it, it just write about it. of coarce loads of others still don't get it or under stand me, but i can't talk about it and it's some thing that they have to except every time. it's NOT down to them or any one else how i live my life...! |
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