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Place for you
Contributed by
Ryoko
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:41:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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If I could take it all on me I would,
As long as it isnt my pain Im feeling,
You can take mine away for awhile,
And Ill put yours in a box.
I dont know what to say anymore,
It feels like youve drained me of words,
Im exhausted of this self appointed job,
Im carrying on though, cos I can.
Youre important to me you know,
I doubt thatll change within myself,
Im tryin my hardest to watch you.
Im always going to love you.
Youre a complex person, youre an enigma,
Youre one of the closest people to me,
I respect you and all you represent,
Ill never find a friend like you anywhere else.
Sometimes I think youre like me,
But I realise your more controlled,
Im helping with all I can,
I dont want you angry,
Your funny and your original,
Youre the best person for her,
I dont mean to threaten you,
But hurt her and Ill come after you.
What can I say about you?
Youre the one who says the most about me,
To be honest, I hate you for that
I always will.
Your there for me always,
I hope im not wrong about you,
Im never leaving this place,
the place where i see you.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-07-11 15:41:38]
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Re: Place for you
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by bit0kuntry on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 06:08:15 PM AEST
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a mirror?
probably not, but I loved the poem. |
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Re: Place for you
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by loopylou on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 12:49:36 PM AEST
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| Hey there! wow this was really intreasting. i like the idea of this very clever kells. i like the way you combined everyone in the end. i loved it. |
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